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j0hn_c3na
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:22 pm    Post subject: Grammar Mistakes/Typos (Minor Bugs) - Report Them Here Reply with quote

On the logs:

Quote:
war victims:
******
Experience:
****** XP
Gold pilliged
****** gp


The "w" on "war victims" should be capitalized.
"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a" and not an "i".

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The icon should be named "Disband" and not "Diband".

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Build -> Defence

Protective pads crenelated_wall round_tower


Would look better if the first letters of each word were capitalized and the underscores were removed.

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Build -> Offense

Offence: +5%

Quote:
"British defence, offence, pretence; American defense, offense, pretense: but compounds such as defensive, offensive, pretension, pretentious are always thus spelled." - Taken from Wikipedia


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Build -> Upgrades

MINES -> Should be "Mines"
Workshops
Castle Upgrades

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Home -> Hero

Mercenary Cost: Mercenary "maintainace" is cheaper.
Correct word is "maintenance"


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bashar
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

ok thx
I'lll corect the spelling errors
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j0hn_c3na
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:57 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No problem and "correct" is with 2 "r" Wink

Some more minor spelling mistakes/typos:

Buy -> Research

The Titles:

Weapon Improvments
Economy Improvments
City Improvments
It's spelled Improvements

Phisical Training
It's spelled Phisycal

The Researches:

Agility Training - "give you inishgt on their"
It's spelled insight

Spy defence - "you pitty those"
It's spelled pity

Mining - "chooped trees"
It's spelled chopped

Coins - "keeping recors of"
It's spelled records

Man at Arms - "provide citisens more"
It's spelled citizens

Health - "you herbalists"
Should be your

Health - "that allpied on"
It's spelled applied

Health - "healing quicker the wound."
Should be healing the wound quicker

Here are some suggestions for the "No description found" researches.

Monster Slayer
Description - knowing how a monster behaves in battle helps thy troops, the better you know the monster the better you will fight against it

Monster Scouting
Description - having knowledge of what thy troops will fight against is always a bonus, the element of surprise helps in many battles
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PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:08 pm    Post subject: Re: Grammar Mistakes/Typos (Minor Bugs) Reply with quote

you got them all right except this one:

j0hn_c3na wrote:
On the logs:

"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a" and not an "i".



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j0hn_c3na
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PostPosted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 10:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You didn't see it correctly, my fault (Should have mentioned it was on the second "i")

This is what is on the attack logs:

Quote:
Gold pilliged
****** gp


"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a", not an "i".

In bold - Wrong word
Underlined - Correct word

The spelling correction is meant towards the second "i" on the misspelled word which is on the logs.

Hope I didn't confuse you.
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 6:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

oky, now i get it
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bashar
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

sorry for the low reply time
exams problem


corrected everything except buttons(don't have acces to psd file)
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j0hn_c3na
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PostPosted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 5:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

No need to be sorry.
We all have our time-consuming activities.

I hope your exams went well.

Thank you for your time correcting the above mistakes.
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ennarion



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:45 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

A few more suggestions (note that these texts are for the later researches, so it might look different in your account):

Research category
Quote:
Phisycal Training
should be:
Quote:
Physical Training


Sword Training:
Quote:
the new swords presented fresh from the craftsmen are easyer to handle, and add protection.

Should be: the new swords presented fresh from the craftsmen are easier to handle, and add protection.

Strength Training:
Quote:
phisycal superiority is a must; practice makes perfect.

Should be: physical superiority is a must; practice makes perfect.

Spy Offence:
Quote:
capturing enemy goods, you discover trunkfuls of clothing ... maybe you will find easyer to slip betwenn enemy lines, dressed up as one of them.

Should be: capturing enemy goods, you discover trunkfuls of clothing ... maybe you will find it easier to slip between enemy lines, dressed up as one of them.

Mining:
Quote:
chopped trees can be used for transporting all those carved goods at the quaries, boosting production.

Should be: chopped trees can be used for transporting all those carved goods at the quarries, boosting production.

Trading:
Quote:
a few skilled trading specialist propose creating guildes; somehow this will be more helpful.

Should be: a few skilled trading specialists propose creating guildes; somehow this will be more helpful.

Coins:
Quote:
keeping records of your transactions help keeping track of money, and you can see costs droping with every transaction!

Should be: keeping records of your transactions helps keeping track of money, and you can see the costs dropping with every transaction!

Landowner:
Quote:
the landlords were a good ideea; but if all shoud join the same cause .. yours .. might improve things.

Should be: the landlords were a good idea; but if all would join the same cause .. yours .. it might improve things.

Masoning:
Quote:
today you chief mason proposed using gunpowder to disrupt huge blocks of ore; he plays with fire ...

Should be: today your chief mason proposed using gunpowder to disrupt huge blocks of ore; he plays with fire ...

Man at Arms:
Quote:
all the improvements made in the city provide citizens more spare time. you can see them gather near the barracks often, watching and learning.

Should be: all the improvements made in the city provide citizens with more spare time. you can see them gather near the barracks often, watching and learning.

House Construction:
Quote:
reinforcing houses' roofs turns out a good ideea, providing more inhabitans a shelter, at low costs.

Should be: reinforcing houses' roofs turns out to be a good idea, providing a shelter for more inhabitants, at low costs.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:55 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

thx a lot i am not so good at english grammar or spelling
corrected all mistakes
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ennarion



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

bashar wrote:
thx a lot i am not so good at english grammar or spelling
corrected all mistakes

You're welcome Smile
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PostPosted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 10:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote



The text in the box should be:
"Drinking this potion will reset all your hero's stats and skills.
You can't reset your hero more then once."

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The story of a great battle

Line 18 - "We would have a bigger chance of wining the war."

Should be "We would have a bigger chance of winning the war."

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Last line - "But who wins the war it's what really maters .."

Should be "But who wins the war it's what really matters .."
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PostPosted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:38 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

when i'll get back from my 1 may holiday i will fix this
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ave



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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:12 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="j0hn_c3na"]

The text in the box should be:
"Drinking this potion will reset all your hero's stats and skills.
You can't reset your hero more then once."

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I suggest you also correct "then" in "than". ("then" = atunci, "than"=decat. Sensul aici este de "numai o singura data". ) Or even better, you can rephrase: "You can only reset your hero once. / You can reset your hero only once."
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PostPosted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:16 pm    Post subject: another bug report :) Reply with quote

Quite funny, actually Smile

It is "Bugs report", not "Bug's report" -> the reports do not belong to the bugs, they are about the bugs Wink
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