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j0hn_c3na
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 Posted: Sat Aug 26, 2006 8:22 pm Post subject: Grammar Mistakes/Typos (Minor Bugs) - Report Them Here |
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On the logs:
| Quote: | war victims:
******
Experience:
****** XP
Gold pilliged
****** gp |
The "w" on "war victims" should be capitalized.
"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a" and not an "i".
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The icon should be named "Disband" and not "Diband".
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Build -> Defence
Protective pads crenelated_wall round_tower
Would look better if the first letters of each word were capitalized and the underscores were removed.
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Build -> Offense
Offence: +5%
| Quote: | | "British defence, offence, pretence; American defense, offense, pretense: but compounds such as defensive, offensive, pretension, pretentious are always thus spelled." - Taken from Wikipedia |
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Build -> Upgrades
MINES -> Should be "Mines"
Workshops
Castle Upgrades
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Home -> Hero
Mercenary Cost: Mercenary "maintainace" is cheaper.
Correct word is "maintenance"
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bashar
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| Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 1:23 pm Post subject: |
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ok thx
I'lll corect the spelling errors |
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j0hn_c3na
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| Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 1:57 pm Post subject: |
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No problem and "correct" is with 2 "r" 
Some more minor spelling mistakes/typos:
Buy -> Research
The Titles:
Weapon Improvments
Economy Improvments
City Improvments
It's spelled Improvements
Phisical Training
It's spelled Phisycal
The Researches:
Agility Training - "give you inishgt on their"
It's spelled insight
Spy defence - "you pitty those"
It's spelled pity
Mining - "chooped trees"
It's spelled chopped
Coins - "keeping recors of"
It's spelled records
Man at Arms - "provide citisens more"
It's spelled citizens
Health - "you herbalists"
Should be your
Health - "that allpied on"
It's spelled applied
Health - "healing quicker the wound."
Should be healing the wound quicker
Here are some suggestions for the "No description found" researches.
Monster Slayer
Description - knowing how a monster behaves in battle helps thy troops, the better you know the monster the better you will fight against it
Monster Scouting
Description - having knowledge of what thy troops will fight against is always a bonus, the element of surprise helps in many battles |
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norbeert
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| Posted: Mon Sep 04, 2006 1:08 pm Post subject: Re: Grammar Mistakes/Typos (Minor Bugs) |
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you got them all right except this one:
| j0hn_c3na wrote: | On the logs:
"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a" and not an "i".
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j0hn_c3na
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| Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 10:06 pm Post subject: |
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You didn't see it correctly, my fault (Should have mentioned it was on the second "i")
This is what is on the attack logs:
| Quote: | Gold pilliged
****** gp |
"Pillaged" is spelled with an "a", not an "i".
In bold - Wrong word
Underlined - Correct word
The spelling correction is meant towards the second "i" on the misspelled word which is on the logs.
Hope I didn't confuse you. |
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norbeert
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| Posted: Fri Sep 08, 2006 6:28 pm Post subject: |
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| oky, now i get it |
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bashar
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| Posted: Tue Sep 12, 2006 1:48 pm Post subject: |
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sorry for the low reply time
exams problem
corrected everything except buttons(don't have acces to psd file) |
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j0hn_c3na
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| Posted: Fri Sep 15, 2006 5:46 pm Post subject: |
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No need to be sorry.
We all have our time-consuming activities.
I hope your exams went well.
Thank you for your time correcting the above mistakes. |
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ennarion
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| Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 6:45 pm Post subject: |
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A few more suggestions (note that these texts are for the later researches, so it might look different in your account):
Research category should be:
Sword Training:
| Quote: | | the new swords presented fresh from the craftsmen are easyer to handle, and add protection. |
Should be: the new swords presented fresh from the craftsmen are easier to handle, and add protection.
Strength Training:
| Quote: | | phisycal superiority is a must; practice makes perfect. |
Should be: physical superiority is a must; practice makes perfect.
Spy Offence:
| Quote: | | capturing enemy goods, you discover trunkfuls of clothing ... maybe you will find easyer to slip betwenn enemy lines, dressed up as one of them. |
Should be: capturing enemy goods, you discover trunkfuls of clothing ... maybe you will find it easier to slip between enemy lines, dressed up as one of them.
Mining:
| Quote: | | chopped trees can be used for transporting all those carved goods at the quaries, boosting production. |
Should be: chopped trees can be used for transporting all those carved goods at the quarries, boosting production.
Trading:
| Quote: | | a few skilled trading specialist propose creating guildes; somehow this will be more helpful. |
Should be: a few skilled trading specialists propose creating guildes; somehow this will be more helpful.
Coins:
| Quote: | | keeping records of your transactions help keeping track of money, and you can see costs droping with every transaction! |
Should be: keeping records of your transactions helps keeping track of money, and you can see the costs dropping with every transaction!
Landowner:
| Quote: | | the landlords were a good ideea; but if all shoud join the same cause .. yours .. might improve things. |
Should be: the landlords were a good idea; but if all would join the same cause .. yours .. it might improve things.
Masoning:
| Quote: | | today you chief mason proposed using gunpowder to disrupt huge blocks of ore; he plays with fire ... |
Should be: today your chief mason proposed using gunpowder to disrupt huge blocks of ore; he plays with fire ...
Man at Arms:
| Quote: | | all the improvements made in the city provide citizens more spare time. you can see them gather near the barracks often, watching and learning. |
Should be: all the improvements made in the city provide citizens with more spare time. you can see them gather near the barracks often, watching and learning.
House Construction:
| Quote: | | reinforcing houses' roofs turns out a good ideea, providing more inhabitans a shelter, at low costs. |
Should be: reinforcing houses' roofs turns out to be a good idea, providing a shelter for more inhabitants, at low costs. |
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bashar
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| Posted: Sat Dec 02, 2006 4:55 pm Post subject: |
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thx a lot i am not so good at english grammar or spelling
corrected all mistakes |
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ennarion
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| Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 1:51 am Post subject: |
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| bashar wrote: | thx a lot i am not so good at english grammar or spelling
corrected all mistakes |
You're welcome  |
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j0hn_c3na
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| Posted: Thu Apr 26, 2007 10:48 pm Post subject: |
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The text in the box should be:
"Drinking this potion will reset all your hero's stats and skills.
You can't reset your hero more then once."
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The story of a great battle
Line 18 - "We would have a bigger chance of wining the war."
Should be "We would have a bigger chance of winning the war."
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Last line - "But who wins the war it's what really maters .."
Should be "But who wins the war it's what really matters .." |
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bashar
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| Posted: Fri Apr 27, 2007 1:38 am Post subject: |
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| when i'll get back from my 1 may holiday i will fix this |
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ave
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| Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:12 pm Post subject: |
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[quote="j0hn_c3na"]
The text in the box should be:
"Drinking this potion will reset all your hero's stats and skills.
You can't reset your hero more then once."
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I suggest you also correct "then" in "than". ("then" = atunci, "than"=decat. Sensul aici este de "numai o singura data". ) Or even better, you can rephrase: "You can only reset your hero once. / You can reset your hero only once." |
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ave
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| Posted: Thu May 03, 2007 8:16 pm Post subject: another bug report :) |
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Quite funny, actually
It is "Bugs report", not "Bug's report" -> the reports do not belong to the bugs, they are about the bugs |
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